Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Chapter 3 The 400th Floor

Colbi started to look even harder for his dad.This time he looked through 40 stores but Colbi

could not find his dad in any of the stores.Colbi started to feel sleepy and fell asleep on the cold

floor of the building.After 45 minutes had passed Colbi had woke up.He got up and started to

look for his dad again.He looked for 2 hours.Colbi was exhausted and sat down on a bench.He had

no idea where his dad could be.He got up and went to the golf store again.His dad still wasnt in

the golf store.Colbi looked through 57 stores but his dad wasnt in any of them.He went back to

the Disney Store but his dad was not in the Disney Store.Colbi got on the elevator and went to

the 400th floor.This floor had many more stores than the 368th floor.the 400th floor also

seemed a lot bigger than the 368th floor.Colbi got off the elevator and started looking for his

dad.He looked through 79 stores but his dad was not in any of the stores.There were still a lot

more stores to look through.By this time Colbi was starting to feel sad.

1 comment:

Melissa Ross said...

Oh my goodness! Where is Colbi's father? Did he make it to the chocolate store? Will he every find him? Will he be lost in the 50 story building forever? I can't wait for the next chapter!